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Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

  • Template:Infobox Scientist should be added
  • Photograph/portrait etc should be added
  • Article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
  • Existing material needs reorganisation to reduce repetition
  • Information on research should be expanded
  • References should be expanded and converted to inline format
  • External links to useful online resources should be added if available

Espresso Addict 16:58, 11 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]